The great thing about this document is that it exists: humans are serious returning to the Moon, and then to Mars. This is the US plan, but it is not clear yet whether it will be China or the US that wins the undeclared but fierce race back to the Moon. In the words of Mike Tyson, "Everyone has a plan until they get punched in the mouth." Readers should want to read this document because it provides a comprehensive and detailed overview of NASA's Moon-to-Mars architecture, offering insights into the future of space exploration and the potential for scientific and technological advancements that will benefit humanity. It addresses current public issues such as the need for sustainable space exploration, the importance of scientific research and discovery, and the potential for economic opportunities in space. By understanding the architecture and its goals, readers can gain insights into how NASA is planning to proceed, and what the obstacles may be. This annotated edition illustrates the capabilities of the AI Lab for Book-Lovers to add context and ease-of-use to manuscripts. It includes several types of abstracts, building from simplest to more complex: TLDR (one word), ELI5, TLDR (vanilla), Scientific Style, and Action Items; essays to increase viewpoint diversity, such as Grounds for Dissent, Red Team Critique, and MAGA Perspective; and Notable Passages and Nutshell Summaries for each page.