This poem is beautifully written. It is very difficult to achieve the emotion and depth that a person often feels in poetry. It is even more difficult to express that depth in rhyme. This poem has achieved just that. It expresses, in an open, loving way, the desire to raise someone above where they believe their position should be in life. And again, I say, beautifully written! -Tammi A. Gray, on For You
Ain’t we a little freakie-deakie!!!! Just kiddin’, these are really nice. You got skilllzzzzz, giiirrrrllll!!!!! -Abdual Chestnut, on Small Play to Painful Passion
I think it’s awesome: It laughs at the thought As the wind passes by I really liked that part…The whole thing flows awesomely…I like that. An easy read. -Racheal, on Them Internet comments about Sound OFF
The poem is great as you said…if allowed…can put thoughts into one’s head… -texaswolf I love it -TuesdayCookie For sure it flows! KICK A–!! -wuvs TJ